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Post  Woojin Thu Jun 04, 2009 2:31 am

i remember my first glimpse of her face
i saw you smile, then i smile
i was straight blown away
mesmerized by your beauty from your feet to your hands
how could one be so beautiful i don't understand
heaven sent, god's gift without a doubt in my mind
sometimes i wonder why our paths decided to collide
we started off as perfect strangers
boy meets girl, infatuation to love
now you're my whole entire world
destiny taps me on the back -- saying hello
but really it was your touch
no and i'll never let you go
then you spoke i never heard a voice so sweet
and from her words man i knew this girl was deep
just like me
with times to worry and times to play
we'll sit and stress over life or just burn the day away

i know for sho' in our past life
we had to be friends livin and dyin together
knowin that we would meet again
it's just a blessin to have you in my life
i was destined, to be with you
i'm privileged, so amazing no question
and i'm knowin, soon enough we'll get where we're goin
just thinkin about it i can feel my heart growing
am i trippin? or is it that i finally see?
i don't know, but my heart is saying that you're the one for me
please believe me, i'm exactly where i wanna be
this rhyme is written from my heart to you

you turn a cocooned soul into a butterfly
and i, lose control, can never turn aside
you shine like summer skies, like when a lover lies next to me and says to me
you make me wonder why
you are a beautiful mystery
every note carved into musical history
a simile, metaphor... words not enough to
entrust to you,
trust that its true
we must have a clue but we asked for evidence
dwell in passing sentiments though we bask in eminence
every moment every day, busy getting paid away, the soul fades away into a grainy shade of grey
i pray, that you'll listen to what i say,
cause i feel like a missing shoe
this is to everything that you are,
the wild earth, a child's birth, sun moon and the stars

so i ask what would i be without you?
like stevie without wonder
hunger without food
a sheep without a shepherd
asleep without your message
that despite the skeptic, in the end you were true
and i knew, that there was more to life
and i grew, livin for the light
i took my answers, combined them with yours
it made life exciting but it closed some doors
word to christ, my life accelerated and deflated
sunk to the bottom, then elevated till i made it
but you always had my back though
when kids threw rocks at me or on stage rappin
still -- i see kids without love
it brings tears to my soul
but why they always drop up
the world's gone bonkers
you've conquered fear
and as long as i believe
you're the reason i'm here

shits deep. Give credit to Epik High for coming up with this.

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Post  ~Ares~ Thu Jun 04, 2009 7:44 am

beautiful just beautiful Very Happy

i read just the first lines xD

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Post  rainiisays Sun Jun 21, 2009 1:54 pm

It's a nice poem, but it ... doesn't rhyme. Lol.
I like the first 4 lines. =)


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